Young Writers Society

Hey jay here to leave a review here from your lovely poem called blue

lets get to it

First when i read this poem i know it came in to your mind to make a poem like this it yeah us people we use our feelings to make in a poem yeah thats us who writes our poems but blue was actually good my good part from it was Blue

is the hushed whisper

of angels, maybe?

tasting of clouds.

And halos.

And glory. like you did your best and put your effort in to this poem i love it it was the best thing we forever gotten

Second my compliment with your poem is just keep doing better with your good mind of making good poems in you use your brain as well to help you inspire the people out there that really loves you


third how you could of inprove was the words that you had forgotten in the poem was like ummm well the ocean is blue blah blah blah whatever you could of thought of something along with that



keep writing and this was a amazing poem called blue!!

Hi! I'm here for a review.

I love this poem! Blue is probably my favourite colour, and I'm glad to see a poem written about it.

The hyperbole and imagery are absolutely stunning.
I think my favourite lines were

blue-glazed puddles
glossed with sky.

Blue
is the curling wisps of
Mystery.
Magic.
Melancholy.
wafting into our
world from
somewhere else.

Blue
is the hushed whisper
of angels, maybe?
tasting of clouds.
And halos.
And glory.

Wow, if blue wasn’t already my favorite color you would have convinced me. This imagery is amazing, and your metaphors are so creative. My favorite line is definitely
“ ribboned with
the earth's quick,
and the rain's damp. “
It really stuck out to me. I also loved your use of italics, it really makes the poem feel flowy and deep visually as well as when you read it or hear it. Great work!!

Hello! Wallflower here with a quick review

Firstly, the main thing that really stuck out to me about this poem was how vivid your imagery is. Throughout the poem, I found myself visualizing and falling into the scenes you described.

Along with this, your myriad ways to view the colour blue is incredibly creative; a lovely idea that was also very well-executed.

"...blue-glazed puddles/glossed with sky." These couple of lines were so incredibly unique and vivid; I could really see your individual writing style here. I've never seen another poem describe puddles quite like this.

Overall, your writing style, ideas, and imagery are all lovely! This poem is a fantastic and fascinating weaving-together of these to create a beautiful, personal, and incredibly unique work of art.

Keep writing!!

Good morning, afternoon, evening, night, or whatever applies to you in your respective time zone. Anyway, onto the review. This was an interesting poem! I love how you connected the color to all these different things.

The only things I might change, would be the last two lines the seem a bit off. Maybe make them more like “Of halos./Of glory”. This is just me nit picking, please feel free to ignore me.

blue-glazed puddles
glossed with sky.

hello BetsyJ! Nicole here with a short review.


first impressions: wow, I love the description of the color! that is such a great idea for a poem. it really makes you think of the color blue in such a different way. i like the way you described it here:

''Ghostlike and hazy

like the swell of smoke.

The bite of winter.

Blue

is the curling wisps of

Mystery.

Magic.

Melancholy.''

Hi there Betsy! I really enjoyed reading this poem, so I thought I'd stop by with a review for you :)

My immediate impression of this poem is that it is chock-full of gorgeous imagery. It opens up with the beautifully alliterative phrase "Our souls are / a secret sweep of / Blue--", and the images just get even better from there! I love how there's a variety of images, ie the poem touches puddles and smoke and angles, but everything is still held together really well by the overriding theme of blue-ness. If I had to pick a favourite part, I think it would be

Blue

is the curling wisps of

Mystery.

Magic.

Melancholy.

wafting into our

world from

somewhere else.

Damn! I've never read a poem that made me see a color differently before!
Everything you related blue to had nothing to do with color, and yet it all did feel like a shade of blue when I thought about it. I've never thought about seeing colors in such things before!
I think I've learned something here that I can put into my stories in the future for better mood.
Your poem showcased that colors can be anything, good, bad, and unusual, and that's something I haven't seen before' I'm impressed.

I enjoyed this poem talking about the color blue and how it could be more than just a color.It's lovely and poetic! My favorite parts were these lines:"Blue is the curling wisps of mystery.magic.melancholy." This tells me that blue brings the feeling of beauty and so much to discover.

The color blue can bring to mind many different feelings,like calmness,guilt or sadness.Maybe even all at the same time.This poem captured that perfectly.

Great job on the poem!