Published October 15, 2007
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The thing about NaNo is that it is meant to be started and completed in the month of November, and editing comes in December. It doesn't seem fair to submit something you've already started, and its even mentioned in the rules.
It's good writing, I must say. But all the swares and insults to religion are driving off a lot of people who might want to read your story. If your okay with that, fine. But I must say, if the other parts are like this, I don't think I'd want to read them.