Hey Atsmai!
It's Review Day and it's MergSword here with a review!
So I usually begin like this: Memorable Quotes!
Every time I crack my knuckles, I feel like the Tin-man, needing to be oiled again: Good introduction, it's not necessarily magnetic and it may cause a slight loss of interest for the rest of the poem.
People think me a used computer, not good enough for the shelves of Best Buy: See, I know what you mean but I don't think used computers go back to best buy shelves.
Reboot me again: What does that even mean?
Okay, also, I'm confused. Are we talking about a literal tin man, or are we talking about a computer. If so why is it called Tin Man if it's a computer.
Than again, I like how you added a touch of thought and depth into the thoughts of the " protagonist"
Good Job!
Points: 240
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