Wow. This is a really powerful piece. I absolutely loved the last few line. I think there are a lot of people who need to read this piece. The emotion throughout was beautiful and I really appreciated that you made each and every word count. I wish I could provide some tips or constructive criticism, but all I can say is that this piece was absolutely beautiful.
Amazing work!
-1nspire
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