Published October 5, 2006
Pork Roast, I wish you were here.
Pork Roast, your smell is near.
The thought of you makes my mouth water.
But I know this is all a deram.
Even though how real you seem.
So I shall have to wait,
Though my mouth may salivate.
Oh Pork Roast, how I wish you were here!
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I LOVE the fun & quircky, it is what I am all about.
However, for a such a fun and creative topic, this leaves me kinda drab. Play with it more and attack it from a different angle, it may turn out very whimsicle and fun.