*Please excuse me for my grammar and mistakes
But I can't help it I feel like I must try!
Chapter 2
As we walked towards the academy, we were amazed at the surroundings of the academy’s ground. The roses were never so beautiful, it bloomed so much you thought something spectacular exploded inside of you. The feeling of something that touches you deeply… you get the sense of belonging rather than being out of place. A few minutes of witnessing such a miracle we realized we froze during that time, so we continued to walk.
“The air was so fresh, the birds singing with the wind tingles the ear. It makes you smile” Erika said, “ I know it’s hard to imagine” I replied. Erika then smiled and laughed I was happy to witness that also since she is always depressed. Maybe she would recover and become someone totally positive…hopefully. “ I just realized how life can be so beautiful if you let time grow with you and a smile called perseverance meaning it doesn’t matter how hard the situation is as long as you have that strength, endurance and love you can make it through”
Finally we reached inside the academy after that astonishing experience we were blown away again. The flourishing floor smooth and clean, the light of the chandelier bouncing off the floor to our eyes which gave us sight to everything else. Bronze was the colour of everything inside of this floor. “ I feel like a queen walking on this golden brown mat,” Erika said smiling. My reaction towards her was a little grin kind of like smirk“ Ha-ha am I suppose to be your king”.
Erika kissed her teeth and walk ahead of me to the line up. I guess people are waiting for their book, uniforms and pen. I tried to keep up with her but she is so stubborn and rude she doesn’t have the patience to wait in line.
So she kept budding in like an idiot having people whisper to each other “ What’s wrong with this girl, doesn’t she have respect”. People started get angry making bunch of racket and shoved her back in line with me. Erika was so pissed I was afraid to laugh. At least she learned her lesson, suddenly someone bumped into me from behind. A young lady, I found her very outstanding. She was wearing a white uniform with a tie it was pretty much a nice style. “ Oh I’m sorry didn’t mean to bump into you like that, I’m so reckless” Seeing her frown I told her it was okay and asked her what’s her name? She replied, “ I am a 3rd year student name Lolita, One of the four knights”. I wish I could stay and talk with you …nice meeting you” She ran off before I even knew it. She skipped the line the same way Erika did and everyone adored her. I didn’t have to look at my sister to feel the intensity of her aura strong enough to make you feel like you should not live. “ Calm down, you know she’s been here longer than you and she is one of the four knights” I said, “ I don’t care, it’s just not fair” Erika said. Erika is always the type to want to feel almighty and praised, and if she isn’t praised there is no telling what she will do. Kind of like me when I don’t get my way I get very physical… but at least I know how to control myself emotionally.
To be continued
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