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stuck in today

by Anonymous


Stuck in today

What has gone wrong in the past
Will always affect the today
But it’s up to you today
On what will happen tomorrow

I am sorry for being so blind
And for that i have caused this today
But I want us to be friends tomorrow
And the next tomorrow
But with that, my choice, is not to forget
So ill still be stuck in the today,
Tomorrow
While you’re moving on to the next day…

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Sat Apr 07, 2007 10:31 pm
Lady Pirate says...



I like it, I love it when you talk about being blind, I understand the feeling completely.

I am sorry for being so blind


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Sat Apr 07, 2007 4:24 pm
Alainna wrote a review...



Yeah........this should probably be in Lyric Poetry........

Anyways.....this was very intriguing and meaningful.

But with that my choice is not to forget


I didn't really understand that line......

Good work,
Alainna
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