Published April 7, 2007
Stuck in today
What has gone wrong in the past
Will always affect the today
But it’s up to you today
On what will happen tomorrow
I am sorry for being so blind
And for that i have caused this today
But I want us to be friends tomorrow
And the next tomorrow
But with that, my choice, is not to forget
So ill still be stuck in the today,
Tomorrow
While you’re moving on to the next day…
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I like it, I love it when you talk about being blind, I understand the feeling completely.
Lady Pirate
Yeah........this should probably be in Lyric Poetry........
Anyways.....this was very intriguing and meaningful.
I didn't really understand that line......
Good work,
Alainna
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