Chocolate By:Angel Of God .a peom

by AngelofGod

  • Poetry
  • Humor · Realistic

Published April 14, 2012

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You ask me what is my favorite treat. I ask,"For just a snack or for a mood?" You just nod. So I became a snob. I said in a unpleasent tone,"Chocolate!Chocolate!Chocolate!Chalk!Chalk!" You look confused. So I said again,"Chocolate!Chocolate!Chocolate!Chalk!Chalk!" You say confused as can be,"Chalk?Chocolate?What do you mean?" By now I was unruly in behavior,so I screamed,"What do I mean?!What do I mean?!What do you mean!?" You stare at me with thunderstormes in your eyes No longer blue like the sky You made me likely to die My heart was at unease So I gave you some of these Chocolate!Chocolate!Chocolate! Now we have a date... Just for you to have our favorite treat. Chocolate!Chocolate!Chocolate! We have other things to. Like sweet meat and bean strew. But our favorite for a snack are not these. For chocolate doesn't makes you sneeze. Nor very unpleased. For you my friend are as sweet as our favorite winter treat. And you know what I mean. Sweet Chocolate as it seems. Now my friend remember the question? The second not the first. What do you mean? Chocolate! Is What I mean! And that is also the name of our sweet dean.
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lyssiekins wrote a review Review · May 26, 2013

Chocolate By:Angel Of God .a peom - I think you mean Poem ;)

I really like this for its entertainment value, it was a little hard to process and follow because it wasn't very clean or broken up.

You say confused as can be: You say, confused as can be, "Chalk?...

Sweet meat and bean STEW. Nor very unpleased. I realize this poem is very lax and has a childish jokey merit to it, so I'm not sure if this mistake was intentional or not for the rhythm and tone of the poem. Just wanted to point out the double negative and thank you for writing this frantic playful tone, its very enjoyable.



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