i cry hard

I cry I cry hardBut I don’t when I have my mommaShe holds me tight and cares for me everyday I love her more than life It now my reason for being herethe pain of this i can now longer handlei need to go...i need to go home To my hometown but now ....im trying to fit inIts so hard he pulls me down lying to meits so hard two deathsa street fighter as a lovermy heart is failing brusies mark my arms yet i still love him Terror fills my eyes and I cry, I cry hardHes my love and I hate that he did this to meI gave away almost all of who I truly am To fit into his mold of a perfect girlfriendMy friends tried to warn me to leaveBut I never had the strength IDied the first time u kissed meI lost my most important battleI went under and I didn’t resurfaceI stayed in ur arms where I was safe And I felt protected and that you were my hero And that was sad for i feared youNow here I am standing on my own and here with out youIm better but i still love you With all my heart and I always haveBut now another has stolen my heartIll be gone soon my old flame New zeland will be my new home A boy with red hair is in my futureAnd so are his unborn childrenMy heart no longer skips a beat When I see your face now its just an old fireBurning deep and slow for it never overshadows the pain of what i've gone throughso now its no longer a hot passionSo heres my final goodbye To a boy with nothing to lose or to gainI wanted you but now I wish to get rid of you My heart, my mind, and my sould has had enough So to the boy who made me cry I will love you forever but now Im leaving and never coming backLove always your angel
this is all about you vlasty zabel

Angelheart wrote:I cry I cry hard
But I don’t when I have my mamma It's spelled momma
She holds me tight and cares for me everyday
I love her more than life
It is now my reason for being here

The pain is so hard I cant believe Maybe you could have said, "the pain is so hard tro bare I can barely believe it.
How much I want to go home
To my my home town but now im trying to fit in
Its so hard he pulls me down lying to me

Terror fills my eyes and I cry ,I cry hard
He's my love and I hate that he did this to me
I gave away most of who I truly am
To fit into his mold of a perfect girlfriend

My friends try to warn me to leave
But I never had the strength I
Died the first time u kissed me Love this line
I lost my most important battle
I went under and I didn’t resurface
I stayed in ur arms where I was safe
And I felt protected ur were my hero you were
And that was sad for my fear of u what?

Now here I am standing on my own and here with out u
Im better , I still love you
With all my heart and I always have
But now james has stolen my heart

Ill be gone soon my old flame
New zeland will be my new home
A boy with red hair is in my future
And so are his inborn children this line is awkward

My heart no longer skips a beat
When I see ur face now its just an old fire
Burning deep and slow
But no longer a hot passion
I did like the idea of this poem, but you havent really gone in detail about what happened. What happened? Why did ya'll break up. You have some grammar and sentence structure issues but anyways I liked it just put some more effort into it.
So heres my final goodbye
To a boy with nothing to lose or gain
I wanted but now I wish to get rid of
My heart, my mind, and my sould has had enough

So to my sweet boy I say
I will love you forever but now
Im will leave and never come back
Love always ur angel

the reason behind this poem is my ex and the boy who got me off the horrid road i was traveling with. the pain of dating him almost ended in my own death inside im still realing from all of this but outside the pyhsical scars are no longer a pronounced and as for my friend who helped me this is for u too because im finally proveing i love you for all you did and i wont go back. and for all of you out there looking for a way out of a mans arms who hurrts you all the time just rely on your friend it will help you tones

this i s the first peice i have posted i love writing though