Hey there! Lost here with a review!
First of all, very beautiful and meaningful lines. I loved it! <3
The way you changed my views on roses is just... wow. I guess this is one of the biggest achievements of a writer, to change the views of the reader on a certain topic.
"As if suffering is like a rose; "
We always see a rose as a beauty and nothing else. The pain in a rose is something we just often ignore. Yepp indeed, beauty is pain.
"Painted in blood, with its thorny stem
Yet seemingly immortal and lovely."
As I already said that beauty is pain, these are other lines to prove this sentence. The way you portrayed the scars behind beauty is truly amazing.
Ok! Once again, amazing and well written work. A solid 8/10 <3
Keep up with your writing!
Good wishes!
Points: 3
Reviews: 9
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