The most beautiful stories,Are ones forever interwovenWith that of tragedy and death--,As if suffering is like a rose; Painted in blood, with its thorny stemYet seemingly immortal and lovely.
I am here to reviewwwww. Okay so this is a great poem. Very beautifully written, I love how you have managed to create such emotion in a very short poem. That shows you are a very talented writer. The only thing I noticed is that you don't have a comma after "with its thorny stem". And maybe you could pick another word instead of lovely, just a thought.Besides that I think this is a really beautiful poem and I also think you have a lot of talent.Keep writing!
I really like this poem. I enjoy how structureless it is, really leaving it open to interpretation. your use of punctuation is commendable, the only thing I noticed is a missing comma after "with its thorny stem". Overall, this is a great poem. I like the message it sends as beautiful stories do tend to be tragic ones; after all, what is a life without conflict?
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