Yolo peps!!!! Lady here for another amazing review!!!! Good gravy!!!!! I do believe that most of my recent reviews have been poems, can I actually start to enjoy poetry?!?!?! Anyway, I love this ending!!!! Also how you kept the reader to read on is really interesting. I really liked how you said " taunting her in despicable amusement." this really helps the reader know that the girl REALLY wants to go outside and play in the rain with the other children. I have a feeling that this is basically most of my childhood... Must leave before I get too caught up in self emotions!!!!XD Bye peoples!!! LadyRanicorn out!!!!
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