Published January 13, 2009
When I’m with you
The whole world melts away behind us
You take me from my own darkness
And bring me it to your everlasting light
Your voice gives me the strength
To make it through another night
A night of horror, without you I feel alone
My sleep only teases me with your presence
So when I wake and want to run into your arms
Where I am safe, where you hide me
Like my own little paradise
With your eyes on me like warm sunlight
And your wonderful smell like an ocean breeze
I can’t get enough and I never want to leave
That’s where I belong, with you
I can’t stop feeling this way
So take me and hide me forever
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This is really good.Really brings out the love and Passion towards someone.