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First Impression:
Anyway let's get right to it,
The young girl shrieked in terror, tears were gushing out of her reddened eyes. "Just leave me alone! Do you know what it's like to.. to be stepped on? Crushed. Beaten. Bruised. Left for dead all bloody and broken on the sidewalk? Do you know? Of course not! You don't know , Murray!"
She picked herself up off the cold, rocky floor she was sprawled across and tried one more time to claw her way out of her stone chamber, while her captor stood above her laughing.
Well this is a very powerful start there with that particular image. It seems we've got someone that's being held against their will from the general sense of things that I got and this person here is simply attempting to survive as their captor rages on about something. It certainly sets quite the powerful atmosphere here to start things off. Well let's see where this takes us.
"Ha! Cry! Bleed! Scream!" His voice was menacing. "Go on! Scream out at the top of your lungs. No one's gonna save you! No one cares about you, ya filthy !" He spat down at her as he turned and walked away, leaving her sobbing to herself.
"Anne, what have you gotten yourself into now..." She cried to herself.
Her memories took her back to when she was a child, playing at home on the coast where she lived. She smiled through her tears as she remembered herself running through the back door all muddy from the rain that morning. Her mother was appalled. "Annabel Stacey Bedrinn! What have you gotten into this time?" Young Anne stood there and laughed; "There's worms in the mud, Mummy. Come look..."
Hmm well this is introducing a certain feeling that perhaps there is more to this than a kidnapping....there's a distinct feeling that these two know each other on some level judging by some of the reactions there and that just makes things for one even more terrifying given the situation that's happening here, but also even more curious as to how this occurred here.
The sound of heavy footsteps brought Anne back to reality. She looked up to see a rusty bucket flung down at her and some dried out bread. She rushed to catch it before it hit the ground; but the bucket was too quick for her and smashed against the ground to pieces, the water that was once inside now ran along the dirty ground like a small stream. She scraped with her fingers what water she could make cling to her hands and sucked it from her skin and picked up the bread and took a small nibble after dusting a few flakes of dirt off it.
Oh wow that just escalates the situation even more there. If it wasn't already very clear that this person is not treated well in the slightest in this scenario that confirms it and well judging by the way they react it seems like almost a practiced reaction with no real resistance which suggests this has gone on for a while. Well..certainly a lot of red flags and a powerful place to end on.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall:
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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