Published January 28, 2013
Ever had the feeling, that no matter how hard you work it still seems though, as if you still haven’t done enough but have you ever questioned yourself “who am I working for” or “who am I working hard for”.
Truthfully speaking a majority of people in the world don’t enjoy their jobs,their not satisfied with what they are getting.
For them it’s either too much or too little.
Mostly too little.
There is a question a lot of people ask when their needs are not full-filled, “how do I get satisfaction ?” the answer, very simple, read to find out.
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Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
Well, that's a very interesting piece there, I'm not entirely certain what this piece is meant to be, but I'd say this is much more of a prologue than anything else. And even as that, well, especially that ending, makes things very interesting for what this piece could be trying to convey right here.
The questions that this starts with here are pretty interesting too here...I wonder if this is some sort of generic narrator if the protagonist of the story is talking here, cause either way, those particular questions suggest some pretty intriguing things about this world here. It almost seems like this is going to be some sort of dystopian future world in something related to jobs like that has been altered greatly because of the problem that the questions at the beginning seem to be addressing there.
All in all, this is a touch vague but interesting piece here, and for the most part it seems like something from a story that I'd potentiall read more on here. So overall, this is a pretty good piece you've got right here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
Hey adelina!
Just stopped by to have a look at your work here.
There are a couple of little mistakes like -
that no matter how hard you work it still seems though - I think you mean 'still seems as though'
%u201Cwho am I working for%u201D or %u201Cwho am I working hard for%u201D. - These should probably have question marks at the end. So "Who am I working for?" and "Who am I working hard for?"
their not satisfied with what they are getting. - This should be 'They're not satisfied'
Whilst this is quite short, it's still quite interesting. It resonates with me as someone who has just started work and doing the whole 'adult' thing. You definitely struck a chord. I am interested to see where this will go as there is not a whole lot of information at the moment.
Perhaps you can try and extend the prologue a little, give a few more hints to warrant this prologue. At the moment it does seem a little sparse.
But definitely keep going! I hope to see more soon.
If you have any questions then feel free to PM me
Bex x
Very keenly propagated are your flee of words .
Simple, thoroughly meant; after all the content is porous.
But it would have got linguistic outlook if you have traveled its intense vehemently
Just a jest you have impinged, but the matter attains its essence of sensation.
Accordingly, this has no single answer and the satisfactory factors are many.
Let me redefine my thought behind this,
"The work or the task we undertake is indeed to satisfy ourselves and to make ourselves ready to budge with life as it goes";
and often we question 'why are we doing this when we have better to opt for?' . That deliberately depends on our own consequences.
A good work on a good priority! Wish to see more like this.