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Victoria was sat at the small coffee table in the living room. Next to her were wax crayons and a pile of scrap paper, which, at the moment, weren’t being used. She was slumped on the floor, gazing up at the television. What she had just seen had confused her. She could have sworn she had seen this before. She listened carefully to the news reporter on television.
Okay...not the most immediately attention grabbing start there, but an intriguing one nonetheless. This is sort of halfway between being a very neutral start to a prologue, and being something that instantly grabs your attention. The fact this is a child that's seem something familiar on the tv is not the most interesting in the world, cause after all judging by the crayons you assume its a relatively young child, so it might just be some kind of favorite cartoon...but then the general tone here seems to suggest its a little more grave especially cause this being a news reporter suggests that its some event that has happened somewhere.
“Terrorists have hijacked four jet-airliners and have attacked the twin towers. People inside the buildings have been forced to jump out the windows to avoid burning or choking to death...” Victoria’s ears stopped working. Of course, at her age she didn’t understand some of the words that the woman had said, but she knew exactly what had happened. On the TV screen, a picture of two burning towers appeared. Oh! Victoria thought. Her eyes wandered down to a piece of paper next to her. On the paper was a scribbled drawing that she had done earlier. At any other time, the drawing would just seem like an innocent child’s picture. But right now, it had an uncanny resemblance to the disastrous scene that was being played on people’s TV’s all over the world.
Five-year old Victoria had drawn 9/11, before anybody else on Earth knew that it was going to happen...
Ooooh, well this one absolutely makes you sit up and take notice here. This makes you ask lots of question about what could've possibly caused something like this here. Especially with Victoria's actual age being revealed, that just seems to be hinting at so much. The only nitpick I have is that I find it very hard to see that everyone would dismiss it as a simply innocent child's drawing. I don't see how you can draw a horrific incident like that in a way that at least someone doesn't get a bit suspicious. Children don't typically draw things that are that destructive with no influence whatsoever.
Overall, besides that little nitpick, I love this premise here, it certainly seems interesting enough that I'd want to read more of this
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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