Hello! I was looking for some poetry to read and I found this. It's really good I love the repetition, it really adds to the affect. I also love how at the beginning it starts with "I'm running, I'm running away." and then it ends with "I'm falling, I'm falling down." I'm not sure if I'm just reading to much into it but I feel like it really conveys when you first start struggling with something and your trying to avoid it, then in the middle-ish part of the poem you realize you need help and you don't really know how to do it alone. then at the end you realize it is to late and you're already falling deeper into the struggle. Overall I think this is really well written I will definitely read more of your work.
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