i know that this is out of the green room, but i wanted to give my two cents on its meaning. i feel as though it has been misconstrued into "i dont know" when to me there is a very clear usage of symbolism to portray a theme.
a lot of your symbolism is anatomical. the image of crying into another persons skin carries weight to me, suggesting a deep emotional connection between the two figures. skin represents a boundary between individuals, yet here, it becomes a conduit for shared emotions & experiences. it is very vulnerable & vulnerability is another theme ive noticed. it is both intimate & uncomfortable. you oscillate between moments of tenderness & harshness, yet the overall idea of shame still lingers. intimacy equates to embarrassment.
with that being said, i think this poem is overall describing an intimate encounter with a former partner. your physical imagery, such as "her fingers digging into my ribcage," can be interpreted as a metaphor for both physical intimacy & emotional pain. i think that is very reminiscent of rekindling an old flame or a fleeting encounter. i could also bring up the line "make sure youre quiet when you leave" as that is likely the strongest evidence to me. however, i could imagine many meanings.
overall, this is a beautiful poem. the juxtaposition of contrasting emotions & overarching symbols throughout is perfect. i think it is your best.
envy
Points: 2015
Reviews: 26
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