Young Writers Society

Hi WinnyWriter,

First off WinntWriter my suggestions was the poem was alright and everything but its really good through and let me tell you why it was alright in the poem Calling me insane?
I don't exactly disagree.
It's not hard to see how I diverge
From accepted "normalcy,"
The way I think that others don't -
I know I feel things others won't;
The richness of my inner world
Might drive some others mad, WinnyWriter like in my suggestion this poem was alright nothing was wrong in my suggestion WinnyWriter.

My Compliment WinnyWriter is that reading this poem made me realize it's about someone is just mad you could had put a boy or a girl cause how we reading this how we going to figure out if its a boy or a girl WinnyWriter.

Good luck writing WinnyWriter! <33

This is a really nice poem. I love the melody and the general feeling of it.
I guess it portrays a person who today's society calls a "highly sensitive person"? A person who knows feeling too much brings them pain and makes their life much more complicated and even so they wouldn't exchange any of it for being just dull and "normal"?

Sometimes I'm also on the verge of going crazy from all the intense feelings I have, so I really like the name you chose for a poem.

Hello WinnyWriter,
I hope you are having a lovely day or night

Connected like a maze of strings,
There's fifteen sides to everything,

And scores of worlds to explore;

And so maybe this bit of madness in me
I prefer to the dullness of sanity.

Good rhythm and rhyme. It gives off very Alice In Wonderland vibes to me in the sense that I can imagine the Mad Hatter saying this to himself. I love the story that you told through it. My only suggestion would be to try to use some more descriptive words (which can definitely be pretty difficult in rhyming poems). In addition, be mindful of how many syllables are in each line. I suggest trying to make some practice poems using a 575 style (haikus aren’t for everyone but they can be great practice) or something similar. Other than that great job! It had great length and good storytelling.

Edit: sorry I meant for this to be a review but I forgot to toggle it!

I will review this later!