Good morning, evening, afternoon, night, or whichever applies to you in your respective time zone at the moment. Anyway, onto the review. That was AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! Beautifully written, with a deep, darker theme that contrasts wonderfully with the fluid and delicate style of your poetry.
I think my favorite lines in your poem, was the final stanza:
“The spark flew and caught on your soul,
It erupted in fire
Spreading through your veins,
Reviving your once dead heart,
And awakening your Spirit~“
This stanza is beautiful. It has incredible imagery, letting the reader truly see, and feel, this part of the poem. I truly loved your poem, and I hope to see more of your writing around. Keep writing, and stay safe.
-Lizzy
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