Hello, your poem is very realistic and is talking about the dangers of meeting people on the internet and falling for them. That is indeed very dangerous as you do not know a person well when you talk like that to them, hey can lie and no one would be the wiser. Actions speak louder than words, or in this case text messages. My favourite lines were
"i fell in love with a stranger
through bits and bytes
we have never seen each other"
The poem also has sad tones like when you said
"he tore me apart, and then
he scavenged the debris
for any more pieces he could get his hands on"
And the narrator is justly angry at the person an very hurt, as seen in the lines
"thinking about him makes me
seethe in anger and boil with hatred
not only for him, but myself"
I like how you put so much feeling in the poem when you said you fell in love
"through empty words,
broken promises,
meaningless dreams"
And then about the advice abut not ripping yourself apart for a stranger, it's so true and well-meant.
One should not believe the sweet talking of people from the internet. I was almost fooled too. Like my older brother said a long-distance relationship is not really a relationship at all.
Points: 87
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