Based on your review, I'd like to read this biography. It's a nice tribute to a book that made such an impact on you.
I think this essay is a fabulous length, and gives a vibrant description of what you read. I especially liked this part, "One word was etched in every short narrative – perseverance" that's such a lovely way to describe a person, and gives a lot of context to what you're saying even for those who haven't read the book.
I have a couple suggestions:
First I'd love an actual example of how you've used Anita or been reminded of her in your actual life. To show the concrete impact that she's made. You give a lot of general ways she's affected you from how you see the world, to how you see the power of story, but not a lot of specifics. That's something you could delve into a bit more.
A quick cosmetic suggestion, is that you use hyphens and colons in about the same way, and you should pick one or the other and stick with it (except in words that are naturally separated by dashes). It's similar to why you wouldn't use both (parenthesis) and [brackets] in the same piece of prose for the same purposes.
Lastly, I'd love to read a few excerpts or quotes from the actual book to get a better sense of the writing since that seemed to be part of what appealed to you.
Overall, this was an enjoyable, upbeat, and vibrant piece especially for an essay. You are clearly very passionate about this book, and make the reader curious to know more about it as well. It seems like you've had a chance to have a lot of reflection on the subject, and I hope the book, and Anita, continues to serve you well.
~alliyah
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