Hello this is THE ONE AND ONLY YOU WILL EVER FIND FOXMASTER!!!! Bursts in applause!
Soooooooooooo... mhhh hmmmm hmmm! Drama, family drama, random little brother, a dinner and expecting to get a medal? Let's see where we're going here......
Seventeen-year-old Evelyn is the eldest daughter of King Saran and heir to the throne of Sirila. Her life has always been relaxed and lavish. She always has the best of everything and believes her father is a good king who genuinely cares about his people.
She couldn't be more wrong....
Evil sadistic father hiding his nefarious plots from his own daughter? nd let's not forget how her father rules a KINGDOM! O ho ho, looks like we're heading somewhere...... (sorry, I keep on getting distracted my @Rydia's avatar....)
Comodore skipped into the room and plonked himself down on my four-poster bed. He gave me a gap-toothed grin. "Mari made fun of me because my shoes was scruffy, but I pushed her in the pond!"
I put my hand over my mouth. "Comodore!"
He grinned again and bounced up and down. "Mama shrieked and waved her arms in the air. It wasn't that deep. Treasure thought it were funny."
Do we have TWO evil people people in this family....? Uh oh... and there's a dude named treasure? Wonder where that's going....... wait, false alarm, pond wasn't deep.
I slipped into my en suite and changed into my favourite purple dress and fur-lined cloak, placing my regal crown on my head.
I smiled at myself in the mirror. I looked amazing.
"Come on, Modo." I stepped out of my en suite and made my way down the stairs.
The palace was beautiful. Stained-glass windows, suits of armour lining the corridors, gold banisters - it was the best place, for me, in the world.
We stepped out of the huge main doors and made our way across the grounds towards the Great Hall.
As I walked past the old treasury, I noticed two guards sneaking out of it. They looked around nervously, then darted off in the direction of the guardrooms.
I frowned. The treasury was off-limits to everyone, and anyone who went in there was severely punished.
I walked towards it. What were they doing in there? I'd be in bad trouble, but at least I'd find out if they were up to anything. I might even get a medal...
sorry, girly-girl, I wouldn't count on getting a medal.... wonder what's actually IN the treasury? Is it even a real treasury? Is her father hiding dead bodies in there? Hmmmm... kind of suspicious, but okay. I would NOT follow those people in the treasury, probably for the best!
AAAAAAAAAAAAnd that's all! Tooooootally enjoyed this. Just confused about this treasure guy. Also, If you could review some of my work, that would be great!!!
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