Hiya there. Pastel here for a hopefully helpful review full of rambling!
As I'm a B I G fan of anything in the mysterious or horror genre, I obviously had to read this, and I wasn't disappointed a bit. Your use of words is quite nice, and your writing style combined with this really captivates me. I actually reread this a couple times because I enjoyed it that much.
My favorite part of this poem was the rhyming scheme. It's smooth, and seems very natural and not forced in the slightest. The scheme is very simple - A, B, A, B. Didn't have to look for it at all.
There was one line that confused me with the play of words:
"Not the facing kind."
As TheBlueCat said, what does facing kind mean? Was it just a rushed line to keep up the rhyming, or does it mean something deeper that needs explaining?
Well, that's the end of my review. Hopefully, it was helpful, and my apologies if you didn't enjoy it! Cheers!
- Pastel
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