Hey there! This poem was bookmarked awhile ago, and I apologize for putting off a review. I honestly have so many writing works that I want to review and give feedback on and give satisfactory comments to the writers.
Your 20-line, 38-word poem certainly is extraordinary. I hope this review does not get to be too long, because who really has the time for or wants to read a long, genuine review of a teenage girl at this hour? XD I shall spare you from the trouble.
Now, I'm a band kid. 4th Chair Symphonic Band Flutist, sophomore, to be exact. My second Marching Band Camp is coming up in late July so I have yet to experience the whole shebang all over again!! And must I say, I am quite excited. Last year, I had a crush on the senior gay drum major. This year, I'm close friends with one of them and just acquaintances with the other. It's going to be really exciting.
Now, how does that relate to this poem?
Well almost all of that came to mind when I read this again. Drum majors are supposed to keep time, manage a large group of peers, be in control, and satisfy their conductors. Though this work is short, I think you graze over the lines of what I just said in a simpler fashion.
I love music, and love seeing drum majors conduct and lead.
Thank you for posting this poem! I really have no negatives, though I briefly skimmed through any reviews underneath. Have an amazing day!
~ Em
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