I love this poem and the thoughts you painted.
I like the following very much :
'small smear of blue in the midst of orange,
a piece of hope in the midst of the mess we call life.'
And,
'to witness the viciously beautiful flames that consume the sky.
They prefer to sleep in beds of ignorance
than to accept their unknown truth.'
I like the way you combined one, two, thre....to show the big number! Wonderful!
You can improvise on the title, 'The soul mirror' is not perfect, maybe, 'Mirror to the soul'?
I love the images, and great work!
Keep writing!
Do check my works!
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Reviews: 13
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