This poem was so beautiful to read, and I loved the descriptions of the fire. Your choice of language was fascinating and creepy. The line that particularly got me was:
"Now I am scarlet, you are white,"
There is something beautiful in the contrast of these colours, and it's the line when you really understand that danger is approaching fast. The last line is also beautiful:
"Two hearts; now one core."
Very good choice of line to finish, and gives a sense of finality.
Great work, well done!
Points: 152
Reviews: 67
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