Heartbreaking, its truly heartbreaking. I have loved someone so much in the past that when they walked away it broken me in two, all i wanted to do was kick and scream sometimes maybe even die like the character above. The poem almost seems to have sci-fi quality to it, i just cant put my finger on how to explain it. I really really enjoyed your poem, if this is based on true feeling and event i want to tell you that it gets better, i promise. I know that doesn't mean much coming from some unknown person but God never gives us things He knows we cannot handle.
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