I have to agree with everyone else, I am also a little lost. You should not worry about that to much. There are just a few minor errors too fix. However, I am not entirely sure this is a poem.
The formatting is a little off.
Something that would probably help your poem is trying to avoid caps.
In addition, you could be more descriptive towards the concept of the poem.
These are just a few things I noticed while reading your poem. I hope my review helped you at least a little. Remember to keep writing!
Points: 25
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