I loved this poem. So intense yet delicate in its own integrity. Quick suggestion. Please capitalize at the start of a new stanza. That was the only teeny tiny nitpicky critique that I had about this poem. Otherwise... Wow. You should be able to write a killer romance novel with your use of words and overall symbolism. Please continue to create such amazing work. Are you a poet and storyteller or just a poet? I would love to see you create a whole novel because I am I love with your work. I can't express that enough with one "like." Great poem!!!
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Reviews: 34
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