Heyaa TonelessBard!!
This is Eros here to write a sort of review for this short and sweet poem!!
Since this a short poem, I am not sure if my comment would count as a 'review' or just just get restricted to a 'comment'.
So, let us begin the review by commenting on the title. The title should be catchy, attractive, and captivating. I am very happy to say that your title has fulfilled all the above criterias of a good title.
The next thing which comes is the theme and the basic idea of the poem. I liked the theme. It was unique and simple. Though the theme was simple, you have expressed this differently. This is what I liked about your style. Expressing simple things in a BIG BANGY way.
Then, there is a criteria of choice of set of the words. But since your poem is short and sweet, there is no question of choice of words. It doesn't apply here---no matter.
The next thing is presentation. I liked your presentation.
Then, the next question is how you express things. You have expressed the thoughts very very nicely.
Now, the next part of the review is, my opinions about the poem; or what are the things which I liked the most. These are:
1) I liked how the poem flowed.
2) I e-specially want to appreciate your talent of expressing big things in a very few words.
It is something, very rarely found in people.
3) I like the basic idea which forms the basis of the poem.
As far as I can see, there is no flaw as such in this piece.
It was written very beautifully.
GREAT work.
Now, I would like to end up my review by saying:
Keep writing...
Never cease...
Because we all love to keep reading such AWESOME works.
Have a great day/ night!!
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