This is wonderful.
The structure of this poem is great, and it flows so nicely. You definitely had my attention throughout the entire piece. The rhyming was great as well, it didn't feel forced. I love the verse, "My regrets are far from clean. But every nightmare started as a dream." I see this piece as a sort of confession, and I really enjoy it. And I like how you ended with a question, I think it worked very well.
~FearlessLove4
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