Hello! Scarlet here for review!
I really love the painting, I've never heard of the artist but now I love him!
Disappointingly, the poem was short and I wish I could've read more.
Otherwise it's really good.
There are no grammar issues but maybe a few punctual so I suggest going through there and fixing it.
The lines
'With constant momentum
As death takes what is his.
The sky cracks as the world tumbles'
Stand out to be, I really liked how they sounded and rolled off the tongue.
Thumbs Up!
Sincerely, @ScarletDreams14; Member of Salsa Verde
Writer, Artist, Student and Reader
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