Hi Percybeth!
First off I have to tell you something. Your poem was absolutely astonishing, astounding, breathtaking, just plain out FABULOUS!! (Sorry for the caps).
What I loved the most about this piece was how many roles you gave rain, you began with the cycles water goes through, described it in the boy's hand as he wondered why God was crying, then on the roof and in the faucet.
I also liked how you gave the word optimist with the glass half empty or half full a deeper more elegant meaning to it then just if you see the glass full you're and optimist.
I have no issues with this poem and your imagery, message, everything was just lovely. I loved this poem and it was real pleasure to review it.
*goes on to like*
Keep Writing.
~Catcha01
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