Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
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Insanity. That is the feeling that rises up as thoughts of what those horrid kids had done to her slip into her mind. A burning sensation is felt in the place of her heart. Without thinking, or even realizing her actions, she grabs a knife. Her imagination wanders as thoughts of what she could do fill her head. She feels a need to know what it would be like to slash open the necks of those horrid kids. She imagines the blood splattering the walls, staining her clothes in crimson, and everything else in its way. She imagines the sound of their helpless screams filling the air, as her knife connects with their skin. She imagines herself laughing hysterically, as if maddened by the blood. Her imagination shows her gutting the kids, making sure to take out all the intestines and organs and decorate the room, as if to make it merrier. As they take their last breaths, she would whisper, " Now you go sleep." and rip out the still beating hearts. Her face is no ordinary face. Besides the blood of her victims, she has a smile carved into her cheeks, her skin is leathery, and her eyes, wide open from both madness, and the fact that she had burned them off completely. The fact is, this look fits her, for she is a killer. A killer of the night. Then, suddenly, her mind returns to reality and, as she is putting the knife back, she has a thought. One day, it will not be just her imagination, it will be reality. Just then, she gives off an insane smile, thinking of the day her dream will come true.
Well...this was...intense..shall we say. This character definitely seems to be bordering on the insane if not completely insane, cause those are some very disturbing thoughts at any rate, certainly doesn't seem like the sort of thing that a person would just suddenly think about themselves without any kind of horrible incident happening.
At any rate, that twist at the ending was a pretty welcome one there, to see that this person at least wasn't actively doing any of those horrendous things, but is only having dreams about committing all those horrible acts, which is not exactly a proper consolation but its better than imagining those things actually happening. And well, those acts are certainly described in some properly gory detail here, wow, that can't have been easy to write there. You've definitely gone into some proper detail about the worst possible way that someone could commit a murder. And the fact that the targets in this case appear to be children of course just makes it a hundred times worse. Its just a very powerful and raw description that you've created there. The kind of thing that these kids could've possibly done to warrant a fate that horrible is certainly something very interesting to think about. Phew.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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