This is my honest opioin, I didn't think this was the best poem ever, but I did kind of like it. I just didn't understand the plot. Was it about a bunny or... You get what I don't understand right? I mean come on, it is kind of diffuclut to understand something like that right?
If this is harsh I am so sorry, but I just didn't think this was a right or good idea for a poem. I might be a good book or short story though. Just a segjustion.
I hope you write more poems to get better at them. Cause this one sounds like a started poem to me.
But just understand the fact that this review is coming from someone that literally stinks at poety. I mean really stinks at it.
I am wring my first poem now called Pretty Face, Ugly Heart. I don't think it is the best poem but it is at least a starter.
Well talk to you later.
Hope I helped.
Love,
Dogsrule5
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