This poem was very good and very poetic. I really liked how you said...
Happiness isn't hard.
I didn't see any mistakes in in spelling or grammar. That rolls along right with punctuation. No errors in this either. I didn't see any mistakes in this poem. I had a very good message. I thought the good message was
Happiness isn't hard.
This poem is one of a kind. I really enjoyed it.
I hope you keep writing more and more. Keep up the good work.
Love,
Dogsrule5
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