Hai there, Cairo!
So I read this yesterday, thought I reviewed it, but I guess not. My bad. Well here I am to correct this dire mistake.
I can't even review grammar or punctuation because you nailed it, like a boss.
Pretty much this will be a review on how much I love this piece, ok..go:
This was amazing and beautifully written. Just the fact that you had no mistakes shows how much work you put into this piece. Love it.
To be honest, I had no idea who either of the characters were but, surprisingly, that didn't stop me from reading or liking this. I love the mystery and the intrigue and plus, the dark undertones are the icing on the cake. I feel the struggle and it had me on the edge of my seat. One of the things that I like about this is that you kept it uncluttered to with words and punctuation. Sometimes less is more and I feel like it worked here. Congrats.
I'm not sure if this helped....but I had to voice this or I would have exploded. Love this. Love you. Love your work.
Keep on keeping on.
Much love,
Star!
Points: 6040
Reviews: 87
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