Greetings! Here I am to say things about this lovely piece :3
First off, I like this a lot. Sebessia is an interesting character (LOVE her name by the way), and I wonder what she did to end up in a cell. She doesn't seem like the kind of person who would do a lot of bad.
I love your descriptions (as I always have). Your command of words is beautiful
One little nitpick. The first sentence would probably work better as two different sentences. Just switch the comma for a period and capitalize the t in they.
Nice ending. She seems to be abandoning her old self and starting over. And I feel like she will be doing some interesting things. XD
Very nice work. Keep going with this! Don't shove it in the old sock drawer! I am expecting more from you soon XD
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