Hi, Sunshine!
This is Eros here!
I am sorry for you lost your friend. Hats off to your beautiful work. It was a touching poem. It was an emotional poem. I somehow controlled my tears.
I liked the idea of calling your friend as a sweet angel. It is an age old beleif that after death a person becomes a fairy or an angel. Your imagination is superb! I liked it.
"Dear angel, I told you looked fine without hair." This line suggests that she used to feel sad of the loss of hair due to treatment but you did not allow her sadness to come.
It is a poem which tells us how much you miss her. May her spirit get peace.
My heart got filled with emotions. I can uderstand how you might be feeling on her loss.
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