This is a review about posting poetry in general more than posting this poem because it is not yours, so I can't really say much about it, as Iggy pointed out.
For posting poetry on YWS you can use the [</>] (button) section to better create a concise poem. For instance, in this you use a period to indicate the next stanza.
First off, you'll see something that's like this:
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<p> text text text </p>
text text text
.
The way to post poetry is like this:
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text text text text <br>
text text text <br>
<br>
text text stanza text<br>
text text <br>
or this:
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<p>text text text<br>
text text<br>
text text text text<br></p>
<p>text text text<br>
text text<br></p>
the <p> is a paragraph beginning marker. If you use that, then you create a paragraph by putting the <p> paragraph start marker at the front of the stanza, and paragraph end </p> marker at the end of the stanza. Lines should always be followed with a break marker <br> which is just a break, not a start or a stop marker.
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