I really like this. It's only three lines, but it feels like there is so much depth to it. I can really see these images in my head, and I enjoyed reading it. I'm a little unsure of the setting of this haiku, but I think that's the best part. I don't need to know. It's so interpretable that you don't need any extra information. It's just there, existing, and that's all that matters!
Good job!
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