I really like this poem it's interesting to see what others come up with when there are related poems to the same topic of heartbreak. It really is a beautiful piece. Even thought it hasn't gone fully with me I have had it a tiny bit with those I like.
To the actual review is that the second to last line should be cut a little to match the length of the other lines (just a suggestion). And the title should match the main message not just the first line.
There Is a good message here and I easily see it within the poem and I find you up it behind subtle words. It has a really nice gentle flow into each other so good job
Points: 1433
Reviews: 27
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