Hey there Storybraniac here to review marquee style for paint the roses red. I love marquee. This is a very interesting piece. I loved everything but as usual the last four lines were my favourite. I really liked the way you described the skateboard and the path the skateboarder is going (I'm not sure what I'm talking about). And you need to put the commas where you are supposed to put. As said by Clarity. Anyway this is a very good piece. A definite like from me. Keep writing. ---storybraniac
Points: 94
Reviews: 66
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