Timmyjake to give you a review! Did this make it on literary spotlight? It should have. Its awesome!
I think it tells a story that a lot of people can relate to. To me, it seems to be the fear of the unknown that is connected with a lot of it. She wants to live her life, be loved, and then face her fears, but not alone. Truly epic.
I noticed that when you posted this, it was under lyrical as well. It would make an awesome song! All you have to do is make a refrain for it!!
This was beautiful. I am sorry. I had meant to come here to critique it and even started this to try and do that, but I find no fault. It was beautiful.
Happy Review day!
~Timmyjake
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