Hi dear Skydreamer!!
This is Eros here to review your work!!
First of all let me tell you one thing that I love to play piano.Anyways, I think you used to hear the notes of the piano of a man when you sat in a classroom of your school. The following lines suggests this:
"The melody rises to me as I'm sitting on my seat.
The teacher droning on and on,
while the sounds swim next to me."
You have neither seen the man and nor the man has seen you. But still the piano notes which srikes your ears have taught you something about the life. The whole poem is deeep in the meaning. It is beautifully composed.
The stanza:
"He brings his soul his very being,
into to the world of the unseen.
I try to listen, yet I cannot grasp,
all of what he has to say."
tells us that the man played the piano with all all his heart and soul. I loved to read this particular Stanza.
It is a nice poem and I loved reading it for its huge meaning and the easy language it had.
You are doing great!
Keep writing more stuff!!
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