Just a quick review before review day ends!
This sentence would be better without "it" at the end!
The magical races to the magic that dwell within it
This one would be better without "that" in it:
A realm with beauty that the soul can not reach
Just some suggestions to make it flow easier.
I share your love of fantasy! I love this poem because it talked about the things I love the most, creating new lands and places to discover!
Happy Review day!
yubbies21
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