I love this poem so much. It reminds me of the Sand Man. Someone who protects dreams and sleep. There's such a softness to the poem that draws me into it. It makes me very happy. The rhyming in it is really good. None of it sounds to forced, like it can sometimes. It bothers me that "gone" and "yawn" rhyme, but we can blame that on the English language. There are some cliches in here, but they seem to work nicely in this poem. I love it.
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