Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
People think that the world of the undead and the supernatural, the world of those beautiful and entrancing creatures that you read about only belong in horror stories, fairy tales and bed time dreams. But those people (even you) are wrong.
What if I told you our kind (human life) was only a fraction of what lives upon this planet. That we are contained in a small radius surrounded by a picket fence.
Well, I've seen quite a few stories with this exact premise but well, it is still always fun to run into an idea like this one, especially the whole small area surrounded by a picket fence situation cause that is something I haven't actually seen before. It seems like it could be pretty interesting here.
Have you ever thought how we come up with those stories, you so read in books? Has it ever occurred to you that these wonderful authors have visited this other side? That they come back ready to tell about their adventueres, talking as if they've been gone weeks but were gone a couple minutes.You may be reading this and think: this girl's crazy, well in fact I'm quite sane. I have dreamed of a world so beyond our own. And I have visited it, only in the account of chance.
Okay, well, that's interesting, actually linking the whole thing back to all the stories written about these mythical beings...adds an interesting touch here to things that I do like...all in all, it seems like a pretty premise here, especially the fact that this is someone who's actually been to said place and isn't exactly someone that lives in that place...that suggests this is a from different POV than you run into on most version of this premise.
I have done the impossible, I have walked to the end of existence, only to find it just beginning. Here I have found a life so special it killed to leave it behind. A place were the dead roam, and little people the size of a fingernail fly. A place were blood is spilled only in the account of a meal, and were eyes shine golden in the light. Now I have come back, but only for a little while you see. To tell about my adventures, for if I don't you will stop believing and this world will consist no more. Read on and I promise you, you'll never look at what we call impossible the same again.
Well, that was a fun little speech almost there by the one whose I presume is either telling or writing this story here...aand it is quite fun here...I do like when a story has that feeling its coming from actual real life...its definitely a fun concept for a prologue here.
But I must warn those who take my challenge, that if you go looking for this place I'm about to spill you shall be in danger. Be wise and be safe. Chance just so happens to lurk around every corner.
OKay, that's a fun way to end a prologue there, a little bit of warning of danger, those always get readers very excited to read on, well at least me..xD It seems like something I would read here. Relatively solid looking prologue you've got here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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