I love this poem, it is truly awesome!
Oh yeah, by the way, I am SecreteJournalist.. but feel free to call me Brie! I am reviewing for the Green Lanterns today.. happy review day to you, and welcome to YWS!
What I don't see, is stanzas. But I can understand if that's just the computer.
I don't see anything generally wrong with this, so great job! I am quiet fond of winter for the soul fact that I was born in the winter. The imagery is pretty and true, and Its like I am watching a video behind your eyes. Truly amazing!
The rhyme scheme was great, and its pretty hard to wing it, so you are doing such a great job!
I will have to say, keep writing, I will keep reading, I have enjoyed this poem immensely!
~Sincerely
SecreteJournalist
AKA
Brie
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