Hey there Chewy
Why do you put your initials on your work ? Just curious... I don't cause mine would be MM so it would look like I'm saying mmmm lol XD
I really liked this and I liked how you used the whole "Once bitten, twice shy." Quote in here, sort of intertwined in the lines of the poem and mentioned a little more vividly in the beginning and end of your poem.
I also like how this particular poem wasn't broken up into stanzas... for this poem it just felt more natural.
However, I did not understand the last line. It just left me really confused :/ .
Nice poem and keep it up!
~Kat
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